Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Dream Phantom

Enigmatic: Resembling a enigma; perplexing; mysterious.
Phantom: An appearance or illusion without material substance, as a dream image, mirage, or optical illusion.
Sneaky: Like or suggestive of a sneak; furtive; deceitful.
The phantom of your dream,
Makes your fears begin to gleam.
Enigmatic is the result,
And then you feel it's your fault.
Sneaky is the angish,
When it kills your only wish.
You relise it's night,
And you wish you wern't in the fight.
You don't want to sleep,
So you begin to weep.
You nightmare is alive,
And begins to thrive,
The phantom of you dream,
Is very mean.

5 comments:

  1. its a good poem its a nightmare ou wont want to experience its real life for us

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  2. When I read your poem it makes me think of colour all mixed up in a pot, which is kind of weird! Your poem reminded me of things thatI had long forgoten.

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  3. This poem is AMAZING! i LOVE how you describe the 'dream phantom' very descriptive

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  4. its good but it doesnt make any sense to me, but it has details.

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